http://www.fremont.k12.ca.us/2199203151847453/lib/2199203151847453/_files/March_2,_2010.pdf
This issue was very well put together. The pictures are clear and the headlines are big which is good so they are noticable. The stories are good length and they have good info in them. I saw people reading the issue and complimenting it. It looks like The Argus which is good because it looks real and not ones that a student or a classroom would make. The only things wrong with the front page are that it does not seem that interesting. The stories should have been more entertaining and related to more school activities.
in the second page, the placement of the advertisement is put in a good place which make the stories blend in more with each other. This was a good issue and other than the few minor errors I don’t see that many things wrong with the issue of the hatchet. I think as the issues go on, the quaility of the paper improves and we are doing a good job right now. The paper looks cool and matches one of a real newspaper which is a good thing. I’m rico jones. bye.
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